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src/components/Hero.jsx

@@ -272,7 +272,7 @@ export function Hero(props) {
                         Technology is leaving the boomer generation behind. 
                         Now they're on a war path to disrupt the metaverse.
                         <br /><br />
-                        (Warning: your BOOMER may explode!)
+                        (Warning: Your BOOMER might explode!)
                     </p>
                     {options.unaboomersMinted > 0 && (
                         <p>
@@ -298,7 +298,9 @@ export function Hero(props) {
                 <div className='heroFlexItem'>
                     <img src={Mailbomb} width='280px' alt='Pixelated mail bomb image - handle with caution.' />
                     <p>
-                        Don't let the Boomers win! Assemble mail bombs and blow 'em to smithereens. All minted Unaboomers will be airdropped a mail bomb.<br /><br />
+                        Don't let the BOOMERS win! 
+                        Assemble mail bombs and blow 'em to smithereens. 
+                        BOOMERS will be airdropped mail bombs upon mint.<br /><br />
                         (Warning: Some bombs are duds!)
                     </p>
                     {options.bombBalance > 0 && (
@@ -365,16 +367,16 @@ export function Hero(props) {
             <div id="mintInfo" className="section">
                 <h1>WTF!?</h1>
                 <p>
-                    UNABOOMER is a deflationary Player vs. Player PFP NFT consisting of 5,000 pixel Boomers with 190 unique traits.
+                    UNABOOMER is a deflationary Player vs. Player PFP NFT. UNABOOMER consists of 5,000 pixel BOOMERS with 190 unique traits.
                 </p>
                 <p>
-                    Assemble a mail bomb and burn it to destroy a random Boomer in the collection. Destroyed Boomers will explode, lose their traits, and get burned. 
+                    Burn a mail bomb to destroy a random BOOMER. Destroyed BOOMERS will explode, lose their traits, and burn. 
                 </p>
                 <p>
-                    Mail bomb assembly is open to all. But be careful! Your Boomer can blow itself up in the process. 
+                    Mail bomb assembly is open to all. But be careful! Your BOOMER can blow itself up in the process. 
                 </p>
                 <p>
-                    The more Boomers destroyed, the more likely your bomb is a dud. Shipments begin 24HRS post-mint. Round one ends when 1,000 boomers are left standing.
+                    The more Boomers destroyed, the more likely your bomb is a dud. Shipments begin at a time of our choosing. Round one ends when 1,000 boomers are left standing.
                 </p>
             </div>
             <div id="teamInfo" className="section">
@@ -383,7 +385,7 @@ export function Hero(props) {
                     <div className='teamMember'>
                         <img src={Carty} width='180px' alt='cartyisme Renga PFP' />
                         <a href='https://twitter.com/cartyisme' target='_blank' className=''>@cartyisme</a>
-                        <p>Artist, idiot, and shillosopher. Opensea employee and Art101 progenitor.</p>
+                        <p>Artist, idiot, shillosopher, and Art101 progenitor.</p>
                     </div>
                     <div className='teamMember'>
                         <img src={LZA} width='180px' alt='lza_menace Milady PFP' />
@@ -397,8 +399,6 @@ export function Hero(props) {
                 <a href="https://twitter.com/unaboomernft" target={"_blank"}>TWITTER</a>
                 \\
                 <a href="https://opensea.io/unaboomernft" target={"_blank"}>OPENSEA</a>
-                \\
-                <a href="https://blur.io/unaboomernft" target={"_blank"}>BLUR</a>
                 <br />
                 <br />
                 <br />