From 1e2f92d578ea24456abd36fa0ee305449a82ecb1 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: lza_menace <lza_menace@protonmail.com>
Date: Sun, 29 Jan 2023 00:40:23 -0800
Subject: [PATCH] update copy

---
 src/components/Hero.jsx | 27 +++++++++++++++++++--------
 1 file changed, 19 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)

diff --git a/src/components/Hero.jsx b/src/components/Hero.jsx
index 0492f48..620ed5e 100644
--- a/src/components/Hero.jsx
+++ b/src/components/Hero.jsx
@@ -269,9 +269,13 @@ export function Hero(props) {
                 <div className='heroFlexItem'>
                     <img src={Unaboomer} width='280px' alt='Pixelated Unaboomer profile picture - a hooded man with dark sunglasses.' />
                     <p>
-                        Technology is leaving the boomer generation behind. 
+                        Technology is leaving the BOOMER generation behind. 
                         Now they're on a war path to disrupt the metaverse.
                         <br /><br />
+                        5,000 BOOMERS are ready to radicalize starting Feb. 4th @ 1PM EST.
+                        <br /><br />
+                        Only 1,000 BOOMERS will survive.
+                        <br /><br />
                         (Warning: Your BOOMER might explode!)
                     </p>
                     {options.unaboomersMinted > 0 && (
@@ -299,14 +303,18 @@ export function Hero(props) {
                     <img src={Mailbomb} width='280px' alt='Pixelated mail bomb image - handle with caution.' />
                     <p>
                         Don't let the BOOMERS win! 
+                        <br /><br />
                         Assemble mail bombs and blow 'em to smithereens. 
-                        BOOMERS will be airdropped mail bombs upon mint.<br /><br />
+                        BOOMERS will be airdropped mail bombs upon mint.
+                        <br /><br />
+                        Burned mail bombs destroy a BOOMER forever.
+                        <br /><br />
                         (Warning: Some bombs are duds!)
                     </p>
                     {options.bombBalance > 0 && (
                         <p>
                             <br />
-                            You have {options.bombBalance} Mail bombs.
+                            You have {options.bombBalance} mail bombs.
                         </p>
                     )}
                     <input type='number' step='1' defaultValue={1} min={1} onChange={(v) => {
@@ -327,8 +335,11 @@ export function Hero(props) {
                 <div className='heroFlexItem'>
                     <img src={Explosion} width='280px' alt='Pixelated explosion image.' />
                     <p>
-                        Ready for mayhem? Mail a bomb to blow up a random BOOMER. <br /><br />
-                        (Warning: Your Boomer might explode!)
+                        Let the mayhem begin! Ship a mail bomb to destroy a random BOOMER in the collection.
+                        <br /><br />
+                        Destroyed BOOMERS explode, lose their traits, and burn.
+                        <br /><br />
+                        The game ends when 1,000 BOOMERS are left standing. Shipments begin at a time of our choosing.
                     </p>
                     <input type='number' step='1' defaultValue={1} min={1} max={options.bombBalance} onChange={(v) => {
                         throttleStateChange({sendBombAmount: v.target.value});
@@ -370,7 +381,7 @@ export function Hero(props) {
                     UNABOOMER is a deflationary Player vs. Player PFP NFT consisting of 5,000 pixel BOOMERS with 190 unique traits.
                 </p>
                 <p>
-                    Burn a mail bomb to destroy a random BOOMER. Destroyed BOOMERS will explode, lose their traits, and burn. But be careful! Your BOOMER can blow itself up in the process. 
+                    Burn a mail bomb to destroy a random BOOMER. Destroyed BOOMERS explode, lose their traits, and burn. But be careful! Your BOOMER can blow itself up in the process. 
                 </p>
                 <p>
                     Mail bomb assembly is open to all. The more BOOMERS destroyed, the more likely your bomb is a dud. Shipments begin at a time of our choosing. 
@@ -379,7 +390,7 @@ export function Hero(props) {
                     Round one ends when 1,000 BOOMERS are left standing.
                 </p>
                 <p>
-                    BOOMERS begin to radicalize Feb. 4th @ 1PM EST.
+                    BOOMERS begin to radicalize Feb. 4th @ 1PM EST w/ no allowlist.
                 </p>
             </div>
             <div id="teamInfo" className="section">
@@ -401,7 +412,7 @@ export function Hero(props) {
             <div id="externalLinks">
                 <a href="https://twitter.com/unaboomernft" target={"_blank"}>TWITTER</a>
                 \\
-                <a href="https://opensea.io/unaboomernft" target={"_blank"}>OPENSEA</a>
+                <a href="https://opensea.io/collection/unaboomer" target={"_blank"}>OPENSEA</a>
                 <br />
                 <br />
                 <br />